i have created a short comic strip which is funny and interesting.I plan on making a story on a family picnic that a family of 5 will be going on in a lovely day, and then suddenly a storm strikes and it all ends up going bad.
I think my peer should consider the quality and hard work i put in this work.

My peer should consider the detail that I put in it and the creativity.

My peer should also look for my mistakes, in order to give them to me to fix.